A Few Words on the Italian translation of Příliš hlučná samota
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Afew words on the Italian translation of Příliš hlučná samota gaia Seminara Sapienza Università di Roma [email protected] RÉSUMÉ AFew Words on the Italian Translation of Příliš hlučná samota The article shortly presents an overview of the two versions of the Italian translation of Bohumil Hrabal’s Příliš hlučná samota. Starting by taking into accout the complex philological questions of its genesis and editorial fortunes in its home country, Iwill then examine the Italian translation by Sergio Corduas for Einaudi (1987) and its revised version (by the same translator) for the Meridiani Mondadori edition (2003) in comparison with the text edited in Sebrané spisy Bohumila Hrabala (1994). KEYWORDS Bohumil Hrabal; Příliš hlučná samota; Una solitudine troppo rumorosa; Sergio Corduas; translations, Einaudi editore; IMeridiani Mondadori; Kluby poezie; samizdat. The aim of this article is to synthetically discuss some interesting aspects of the Italian translation of Příliš hlučná samota, first published by Einaudi in 1987 as Una solitudine troppo rumorosa, and revised in Bohumil Hrabal’s Opere scelte (Selected works, Mondadori 2003). Both translation and revision were conducted by bohemist and Czech literature professor Sergio Corduas on the basis of the same Czech source, Příliš hlučná samota, yet the two Italian texts actually differ in ways that atextologist would call significant. The 2003 Mondadori edition is entirely based on the 1994 Pražská imaginace critical edition of Příliš hlučná samota in the ninth volume of Sebrané spisy Bohumila Hrabala, while the source text of the 1987 Einaudi edition has never been clearly identified. Therefore the purpose of my research is to explore it in its context of origin, keeping its Mondadori double and SSBH as reference points, and try to reconstruct its hypotetical source text. Mine is neither an attempt to provide acomplete philological investigation of Hrabal’s (Příliš) Hlučná samota in its original Czech forms, nor it is aproposal of acritical interpretation of the Italian translation seen as aparallel cultural product to its author’s original conception. Such premise is mandatory, for when speaking of Hrabal and especially his Samota it is particularly hard to trace adefined chronological OPEN ACCESS
138 SLOVO A SMYSL 29 line of the different variations, variants and versions1 of one text, whose result being ageneral confusion and critical speculations often based on axiomatic assumptions. Nevertheless, Ibelieve it equally necessary to try and gather as much reliable information as possible about both the Czech and Italian context, in order to contemplate the consequent hypoteses within areasonable margin of probability. Similarly, an overview of some basic historical information about the original text is needed prior to any attempt to analyse its fate in Italy, since it directly affected the first and most widely diffused Italian translation of that text. Moreover, it particularly suites my purpose, since the research Ihad to do was almost entirely of aphilological kind. For those who prefer evidence-based work and are reluctant to accept information if not well documented, Hrabal’s production is asource of great dissatisfaction. The hectic writing of aconsiderable number of texts and atendency to re-write, vary and often disperse them is as much aspecific character of the Moravian author’s poetics from its beginnings in the 1940s as it is aconsequence of his personal history in achanging political context. For my actual purpose, Iam only interested in the time span covering the period from the first appearence of the text Příliš hlučná samota to 1987, year of publication of Corduas’ translation. The first and fundamental textual reference and source of information about the chronology of our chosen text is the ninth volume of Sebrané spisy Bohumila Hrabala: Hlučná samota (Hrabal 1994). It collects all three variations2 of Hrabal’s Samota: the prose Příliš hlučná samota opens the volume and constitutes asection of its own; Hlučná samota— text první variace in verse, and the prose II. Variace represent the section Texty první adruhé variace— pracovní verze. Anote from the editor of the volume Milan Jankovič (Hrabal 1994, pp.243–257) gives an account of the editorial process, starting from its problematic dating, through the selection of one textual variant among the at least two existing of the third variation, to the editorial corretions, and motivates the choice to open the volume precisely with the third variation, regarded by the editors as the nearest to ‘the author’s willʼ,3 despite being the last to have been written in chronological order. Although the editors’ reflections and conclusions are made evident in the first place by the structure of the volume and could be needing further discussion,4 what are crucial characters of this edition in general and distin1 Ideliberately quote Susanna Roth’s words variace, varianta, verze (achapter’ title in Roth 1993, pp.84–91). Since it is not my intention here to discuss the preexisting terminology used by scholars about linguistic, stylistic, content-related elements in Hrabal’s production of varying texts, Iwill adopt terms that Isee best fit from atextological point of view, or Iwill just quote the terms other authors used. Milan Jankovič in his editorial note to the ninth volume of SSBH uses the word text almost as asynonim of varianta, while much more frequent is variace, as specifically referring to the name Hrabal gave to the three texts contained in the volume’s typewritten source. 2 As the author defines them; the editors of SSBH adopted the term and used it to refer to the three main different textual variants of Hlučná samota. 3 ‘Rozhodli jsme se pro otištění rukopisu, který se prokazatelně vrací kpůvodní autorské vůli […]ʼ (Hrabal 1994, p.244). 4 ‘Nejprve je připomenuta verze, která je více dotvořená. Teprve za ni jsme zařadili verze “přípravné”, ač vlastně nešlo vpravém slova smyslu ožádnou přípravu, ale ocestu. Cesta OPEN ACCESS
gAIA SEMINARA 139 guish it from all the other editions of Hrabal’s texts5 are its textological content and its internal organisation. Every text is given acode and, as already mentioned, in this particular instance the editing process is described in detail. This provides useful information not only about the texts themselves— texts that nowadays, after over two decades from the completion of SSBH are far more difficult to find in their physical and original form— but also about the texts that are not included in that edition, and yet were thoroughly examined and compared with one another. This philological approach gives every researcher the possibility to at least outline the distinctive elements of those that the editors of SSBH considered as blind alleys for their purpose. As far as Iam concerned, it constitutes abasic support for my research. The source of the third variation that Jankovič chose for publication is grouped in afile of typewritten texts containing all three variations: Hlučná samota. text červenec 1976 in verse, II. Variace and Příliš hlučná samota. text Červenec 1976. Apart from the clear difference between the first variation in verse and the others in prose, the second and the third variation are radically divergent as of linguistic, stylistic and content-related elements. While II. Variace is written in hovorová čeština, and consequently presents adifferent phrasing that imitates tones and pauses of the spoken language, Příliš hlučná samota is written in spisovná čeština, the literary language that Hrabal himself called ‘úzkostlivá řečʼ (Hrabal 1994, p.253). Above all the two prosaic variations differ in the ending: in the II. Variace the protagonist commits suicide, in the third variation he only imagines it in adream. The date of july 1976 for all three texts is accepted because auctorial despite being conventional: the editor imagines the date of origin of Hlučná samota to be about 1973–1974, as stated by Hrabal himself, yet he assumes that the three different variations weren’t written all at once (Hrabal 1994, p.243). The editor then lists and describes alternative versions of that same text from 1976, printed editions preceding není pro Hrabala cestou kdefinitivnosti […] Je to ovšem také cesta kjistotě náhlého prozření. Ktéto polaritě nás přivádějí Hrabalovy texty na každém kroku. Chtěli jsme ji nějak připomenout ivpřípravě této edice, nesetřít stopy tvůrčího hledání azápasu, zároveň však nabídnout čtenáři bezpečnou orientaci. Vedle standardního způsobu textové přípravy té “klasické”, vnašem případě úvodní variace, jsme zachovali jistou “nedodělanost” přípravných dvou variacíʼ (Hrabal 1994, p.244, emphasis mine). Ibelieve that this excerpt offers an example of the editor’s critical point of view on Hrabal’s three variations. Thus, the editorial note deviates from the hypotetical neutrality of aphilological job, and clearly merges into the sphere of interpretation. Asimilar example resides in the editors’ approach to Kluby poezie (Hrabal 1994, p.246; Hrabal 1995, p.405). 5 Including the most recent ones. An example is the currently underway project of Hrabal’s Spisy published by Mladá fronta and directed by Jiří Pelán. In his editorial note, Pelán states that ‘Nová řada tyto Sebrané spisy nenahrazuje, ale textologicky znich [SSBH] čerpá aodvolává se na něʼ (Hrabal 2015, p.402); ‘Podrobnosti orukopisech itřech verzích detailně zpracoval Milan Jankovič vSSBH 9. Autorský komentář přetiskujeme na s.402–405ʼ (Hrabal 2015, p.473). Ibelieve SSBH to be the only possibile source for new editions of Hrabal’s text, for adouble reason: on one side it offers avaluable philological record of the editorial work conducted on the manuscripts (in Hrabal’s instance they are always typewritten texts), on the other, it offers— sadly— the only remaining evidence of many of Hrabal’s original texts. OPEN ACCESS
140 SLOVO A SMYSL 29 SSBH (Odeon 1989; Odeon— Klub čtenářů 1992) and finally samizdat editions: Expedice 1977, Popelnice 1978, Krameriova expedice 1978 and 1979, Pražská imaginace 1987,6 the first to collate all three variations together and most similar to the source typewritten text of the SSBH volume (Hrabal 1994, p.244). Jankovič also informs the readers about an alternative version of the third variation Příliš hlučná samota, differing from the one printed in SSBH in some specific places that according to the editor also signal its later composition. Jankovič is convinced that this alternative version, that he calls the ‘verze svítěznými potkanyʼ or the ‘potkaní variantaʼ must have been written just shortly after the ‘verze svítěznými krysamiʼ or ‘krysí variantaʼ. He explains that the dating this text cannot be other than unclear, but the hypotesis of its being later than the ‘krysí variantaʼ (black rats winning over brown ones) is supported by external circumstances such as the diffusion of four versions of the black rats variant against only one with brown rats. Anyway he believes the changes generated in the third variation are not compromising, and considers both as authentic (Hrabal 1994, p.245).The alternative variation’s distinctive elements are conveniently described in the editor’s note (Hrabal 1994, pp.243, 245–246) and can be summarized as follows: — Haňťa’s press is mechanical and not hydraulical (this character can be found in many places of the book starting from the first page); — brown rats (potkani) win over black rats (krysy) in the rodents war (in the third chapter); — an excerpt about the gypsy fire is added (in the fourth chapter); — the ending is slightly longer, and it doesn’t mention the name ‘Ilonkaʼ. Both excerpts of the gypsy fire and the ending are quoted from asamizdat text borrowed from Josef Zumr, about which the editor gives no further information than: ‘[…] doplňujěmě text Příliš hlučné samoty podle samizdatového vydání (formátu A4 zroku 1976) zapůjčeného J.Zumremʼ (Hrabal 1994, p.245). Iexcluded from my research the printed editions of the third variation as awhole for being later than Corduas’ translation for Einaudi, and focused on the typewritten source text (i.e. the printed text of SSBH volume 9), its alternative version, and of course the samizdat editions. Neither could Idelete from my list of possibilities Kluby poezie, acollage of excerpts cut from Příliš hlučná samota and Něžný barbar7 alternatively and published in 1981 by Mladá fronta. It shows all four distinctive elements of the alternative version to the third variation in asimilar, albeit not identical form. Jankovič obviously mentions it in his editorial note, but considers that ‘knižní vydání Klubů poezie […] je však natolik celkově nespolehlivé 6 According to Jitka Hanáková, Edice českého samizdatu, 1997, Příliš hlučná samota was also printed among the Rukopisy VBF in 1978. 7 Něžný barbar has asimilar history to that of Příliš hlučná samota. It was probably written about 1973, then firstly diffused as asamizdat in 1974 and as aprinted book in an exile edition in 1981 (without any place or date, but in fact Index, Köln 1981). Only in 1990 was it officially published in Czechoslovakia by Odeon, Praha. OPEN ACCESS
gAIA SEMINARA 141 aničí původní autorův text ideovými zásahy vtakové míře, že se kněmu nehodláme vracetʼ (Hrabal 1994, p.246).8 Sergio Corduas took on the endeavour to work on atext with quite adisorienting history before it was officially published in its home country, and actually participated in the diffusion and success of Czech literature in Italy during the Eighties. The reaction of public and critics to Hrabal’s masterpiece (one among many) was immediate— it earned its author the Elba prize in 1987— and Corduas’ translation has been reprinted several times up to the year 20149 (and will probably be reprinted again in the future). Yet Italy was not the first, nor the only country to officially publish Hrabal’s books (and among them Příliš hlučná samota) before 1989, and to thus let them sneak through the curtain of censorship of normalised Czechoslovakia. Nor was the Italian translation the only one to be affected by the eventful history of (Příliš) hlučná samota.10 Max Keller’s French translation Une trop bruyante solitude11 was the first to appear in Western Europe in 1983, while the English translation Too loud asolitude12 by Michael Henry Heim was published on the magazine Cross Currents in the United States in 1986. There are uncertainties, though, about the translators’ choices: both translations seem to draw upon more than one variation of Hlučná samota, eventually mixing them and producing in fact adeviation from each of the roads their author had put 8 The editorial history of Kluby poezie is maybe even more interesting than Samota’s. In that same editorial note, Jankovič states that ‘při jiné příležitosti bychom raději připomněli knižně nevydaný strojopis Klub poezie zroku 1978, který ovšem stouto edicí přímo nesouvisíʼ (Hrabal 1994, p.246). Klub poezie is in fact the title of atext published in the 16th volume of SSBH in 1995, avolume that in the words of its editors Karel Dostál and Václav Kadlec ‘obsahuje texty, které autor sestříhal ztextů jiných pisatelů, nejčastěji anonymních, apřijal tyto texty “za své”ʼ (Hrabal 1995, p.401). Further on, in their commentary to Klub poezie, they add: ‘Vznik celého textu byl vynucen poměry těch let— adokumentace oněch poměrů je patrně hlavním důvodem pro zařazení Klubu poezie do kompletu Spisůʼ (ibid., p.405). The editors evidently consider Klub poezie as aminor, stranger text to Hrabal’s production, assembled à propos for publication (yet never published), and only worth it because of its being atestimony of apolitically corrupted historical period. They believe its revised and published version Kluby poezie to be even worse. Yet the 1978 text of Klub poezie remained and remains unpublished, for the 16th volume of SSBH only contains, with the title of Klub poezie, the text of Kluby poezie. 9 An ebook version was also released in 2014. While the Italian text in Einaudi hasn’t been changed at all from 1987 to 2014, the graphics of the edition varied four times, in 1991, 1999, 2006, 2014. From 1999, atext of personal memories written by Giorgio Pressburger (who in 1992 wrote and directed atheatre adaptation of Una solitudine troppo rumorosa), Dopo Hrabal, una rumorosa solitudine [After Hrabal, aloud solitude] opens the volume. 10 Milan Jankovič rightfully mentions the French, Italian, German, Spanish, English translations of Příliš hlučná samota to be worth attention, especially regarding their endings (Hrabal 1994, p.246). 11 Hrabal, Bohumil: Une trop bruyante solitude: roman, transl. by Max Keller. Robert Laffont, Paris 1983. 12 Hrabal, Bohumil: Too loud asolitude, transl. by Michael Henry Heim. Cross Currents. AYearbook of Central Europe Culture, 1986, n. 5, pp.278–332 <quod.lib.umich.edu/c/crossc/ ANW0935.1986.001/290:25?rgn=full+text;view=image;q1=5++1986> [March 15th, 2018]. OPEN ACCESS
142 SLOVO A SMYSL 29 them on— afactor that makes it sensibly harder to retrace the history of the translated text. The French first edition contains apostface and an analysis of the textual variants by Susanna Roth that stand behind the translator’s choice to use two source texts— the second and third variation,— in order to insert the negative ending of the second variation (the protagonist commits suicide) in lieu of the third variation ending (the protagonist only dreams of committing suicide). The English translation appears to be, so to say, second-hand, as it was not conducted on aCzech source, and presents the second variation’s ending. It is not my intent to discuss other translations here, but the problems connected with the French and English texts helps me to frame the context in which the Italian translation took its first steps. The examples of Susanna Roth’s commentary and M.H.Heim’s short preface to his translation are useful to understand that behind the translators’ sharp preference for the sad ending probably stood acriticism towards the political situation of Czechoslovakia at the time. In her note to the French translation, Roth substantially justifies Keller’s choice to offer the readers Hrabal’s text in its original, uncensored version, that she evidently believes to be nearer to the author’s original concept (Hrabal 1983, pp.130–135), which is an issue also discussed in her Hlučná samota ahořké štěstí Bohumila Hrabala (Roth 1993; Laute Einsamkeit und bitteres Glück: Zur poetischen Welt von Bohumil Hrabals Prosa, 1986). Heim’s thoughts are made clear in his preface: Bohumil Hrabal’s Too Loud aSolitude [Příliš hlučná samota] was written in the late 70’s. In 1982 the state-controlled publishing house Mladá fronta decided to bring out an abbreviated version of it under the title The Poetry Clubs [Kluby poesie]. To prevent readers from making undesirable interpretations, the editors removed all ambiguous passages, even the grammatical tenses were shifted to make the story appear in atime frame as detached from today as possible. In the effort to preclude the possibility that readers would take Hrabal’s story about the pulping of old books as acritique of life in present day Czechoslovakia, the official promotion of the abbreviated version made aspecial point of declaring that its protagonists represented another, earlier era when ‘life was differentʼ. Only the Prague ‘Padlock Editionʼ issued on the carbon copies, has made the full original text of Hrabal’s story available to readers. It is this typewritten edition which was used for the English translation printed here (Hrabal 1986, p.278). Apart from the inaccurate or missing information about Hrabal’s work (or maybe just thanks to them), it is presumable that one motivating force behind Heim’s translation could be the same criticism for the censorship policies enacted in the Czech normalisation. The Italian text presents none of these problems: Corduas’ first translation was inequivocably conducted on aCzech text of the third variation (as of course was its revised version), it respects the structure and the content of Příliš hlučná samota, including its ending, its phrasing and interpunction. As regards the Einaudi edition as awhole, the text of the third variation, which is furnished with fifteen explanatory notes, is followed by another Hrabal’s text, Adagio lamentoso,13 and by adouble appen13 In 1981 Hrabal wrote that the poem Adagio lamentoso concluded and completed Příliš hlučná samota. The text is unsurprisingly the result of aseries of textual variants probably writOPEN ACCESS
gAIA SEMINARA 143 dix: Hrabaliana, the translator’s commentary to the text (dated september 7th, 1987) and Intervista con un Pierrot incrudito, awritten interview with the author (dated september 14th, 1987). The explanatory notes have the purpose of informing the reader about direct references in Hrabal’s text without straying from the pillars of western knowledge: they are about biblical quotes hidden in the text flow, philosophical works or ideas that the translator believed to be fundamental motives of the story (Kant, Seneca). Historical or cultural references are rare and functional to an immediate understanding: Corduas names K.H.Mácha as the greatest Czech poet and signals that an Italian translation of his Máj already exists; he explains the fictional character of Kája Mařík, protagonist of the children books series, the historical figure of Antonín Koniáš (related to the books burning during the recatholisation of Bohemia in the 18th century), the Tuzex crown, the topographical indication of the gate of Poříčí. Apart from the most common ones already having an equivalent in Italian, Corduas chooses to leave Czech proper nouns, names of places and typicalities in their original form (diacritics included): he translates ‘Staroměstské náměstíʼ in ‘piazza della città vecchiaʼ, but for example leaves the original ‘Karlákʼ instead of translating amore comprehensible ‘Karlovo náměstíʼ, with its Italian equivalent ‘piazza Carloʼ, probably because of the protagonist’s familiarity with it; pubs and taverns names are translated when they have aclear meaning or derive from acommon noun, like ‘Černý pivovarʼ— ‘Birreria neraʼ, ‘Dolní hospodaʼ— ‘Osteria di sottoʼ. On the other side, in the Einaudi editions the pubs names derived from proper nouns are sometimes translated, sometimes not, in an apparent random choice: one can read ‘UČížkůʼ, ‘UJarolímkůʼ and at the same time ‘Hofmanʼ, ‘Hausmanʼ. In the Mondadori edition, Una solitudine strikes at first glance because of its position: the text stands alone in the central part of the chronologically ordered volume, creating an evident pause after the section dedicated to the years 1970–1973 and anticipating that presenting texts from 1975–1979. As regards the other texts contained in the Einaudi edition, Intervista con un Pierrot incrudito is kept by the Meridiani editors and located in the second to last section of the volume, which is dedicated to interviews, while Adagio lamentoso closes the volume in asection on its own. The translation of Příliš hlučná samota was revised, as already stated, following the SSBH text, yet (apart from the differences that constitute the core of this contribution) no radical translatological interventions were conducted on Corduas’ translation but some mainly concerning the text’s homogeneity. For example, pubs names derived from proper nouns lacking an Italian equivalent are uniformly left in the original, yet singular form (‘Hofmanʼ, ‘Vlachovkaʼ, ‘Jarolímekʼ, ‘Čížekʼ, ‘Horkýʼ, and ‘Carlo IVʼ, ‘Re Venceslaoʼ, ‘Città di Rokycanyʼ). Names derived from common nouns are usually translated: ‘Ztracená vartaʼ becomes ‘Casa del Diavoloʼ [The devil’s house]. Moreover, the Meridiani Mondadori 2003 contains asection of Notes and Informations that Annalisa Cosentino edited about each text and which shortly but precisely reconstructs the documented history of Hrabal’s works in the volume. As regards Una solitudine, it offers 30 total annotations to the text, that include and rectify Corduas’ original notes, and adds references to the numerous Lao-tsu quotes, geo-topographical clarifications, historical information. ten in the first half of the 1970s, the majority of which was already lost when the editors of SSBH prepared its edition in the 8th volume (1993). OPEN ACCESS
144 SLOVO A SMYSL 29 The questions and problems that Corduas had to answer and overcome in translation thus appear to be of adifferent nature that those discussed, for example, by Susanna Roth or hinted at by Heim in the languages they respectively chose, and probably derive from the translator’s background in the field of Italian Czech studies. Una solitudine troppo rumorosa was not the first Hrabal’s title to reach Italy. The Italian readers were introduced to the works of Bohumil Hrabal when Ela Ripellino translated Inzerát na dům, ve kterém už nechci bydlet (Inserzione per una casa in cui non voglio più abitare), published in 1968 by Einaudi.14 After that, other Italian translations of Hrabal’s works were published during the 1980s and followed Ripellino’s example in providing the edition with acomment text.15 Sergio Corduas was among Ripellino’s pupils when studying Russian and Czech literature in Rome in the ’60s, and acquired some aspects of his teacher’s stylistic, his approach to literary translation (like the awareness that asound knowledge of both language and cultural-literary context is abasic requisite of literary translation), besides adeep interest in Czech culture, that became his primary target in life. He travelled to Czechoslovakia during his university years and after, in 1971 obtained an appointment at Ca’Foscari University in Venice and then the rank of associate professor. His activity as atranslator was regular during the 1970s and the 1980s (he translated works by J.Mukařovský, R.Kalivoda, J.Hašek, J.L.Fischer, K.Teige, L.Klíma, J.Seifert), and he collaborated with periodicals, among which was In forma di parole [In the form of words], where he published his own transla14 Hrabal, Bohumil: Inserzione per una casa in cui non voglio più abitare, transl. by Ela Ripellino, with an Introduction by Angelo Maria Ripellino. Icoralli, Einaudi, Torino 1968 [last reprint 2008]. The edition also included an indroduction essay: in this case, Angelo Maria Ripellino offered the unaware Italian public an overview of Hrabal’s literary context within his life experiences, of the pábitel character, which he translated as sbruffone (braggart, boaster, but the term crystallized as stramparlone, aneologism introduced in the Meridiani Mondadori edition, 2003) and of some cardinal elements of his poetics (the city of Prague, the peculiar use of language, references to Franz Kafka, Jaroslav Hašek and Surrealism). Ripellino’s introduction was shadowed by astrong criticism towards the suffocating cultural atmosphere of communist Czechoslovakia, where Hrabal had to live and create. In his opinion, ‘pábitelé with their dull dreams and their boastfulness resist the bloated, Pangloss-like activists, the champions of Everything-is-betterif-it’s-Communist […]ʼ (Hrabal 1968, p.10, translation mine). Hrabal’s work is thus seen primarily as areaction to ‘that time that we hope has waned forever, the rusty furniture of aworld that was no life but adump of rubbish, “rumiště”, the unhealthy atmosphere of ahaunted house, where he refuses to live anymoreʼ (Hrabal 1968, p.12, translation mine). 15 The only Hrabal’s text translated in Italian in the 1970s is Pábitelé: Vuol vedere Praga d’oro?, transl. by Hana Kubištová Casadei. Longanesi, Milano 1973. In the 80, in addition to Una solitudine, also appeared: Treni strettamente sorvegliati [Ostře sledované vlaky], ed. and transl. by Sergio Corduas, ill. Aleš Jiránek, with the appendix Hrabal, ferroviere di Dio and the interview with B.Hrabal L’ironia praghese. Edizioni e/o, Roma 1982; Ho servito il re d’Inghilterra [Obsluhoval jsem anglického krále], transl., ed., postface by Giuseppe Dierna. Edizioni e/o, Roma 1986; La tonsura [Postřižiny], transl., ed., postface by Giuseppe Dierna. Edizioni e/o, Roma 1987. OPEN ACCESS
gAIA SEMINARA 145 tions of many Czech authors and often commented them in peculiar texts sometimes written in the form of aletter.16 It was in fact among Corduas’ contributions to that magazine that Ifound the first reference to aplanned translation of Hrabal’s Samota. In the text appended to his translation of Ostře sledované vlaky, Corduas quoted afew words from the first translated page of Příliš hlučná samota and in the related annotation stated that atranslation of that text written in 1976 and still unreleased in Czechoslovakia was being prepared for Elitropia— In forma di parole (‘Příliš hlučná samota, inedito, 1976, in preparazione presso le edizioni Elitropia— In forma di parole, C.P.421, Reggio Emiliaʼ, Hrabal 1982, p.94). Being this first mention so early compared to the actual publication of the book, Isearched the magazine’s issues to ascertain whether an Italian translation— or more probably part of it— signed by Corduas already existed. In at least two issues dating 1983 and 1984 Ifound reference to an underway translation of Hrabal’s Samota and Adagio lamentoso to be inserted with other Czech texts in an anthology whose project was called ‘Bohemariusʼ. After that, Icouldn’t find any other mention either of Hrabal’s Samota, or of the Bohemarius. Ithus supposed that since in 1985 the publishing house of In forma di parole changed and so did its later projects, the Bohemarius was never completed.17 16 In his letters to the authors whose texts he translates, Corduas often reflects upon the difficult reception of some aspects of the Czech culture deeply bond to literature and philosophy: ‘Já však stejně nemohu zamlčet, že Vám zde rozumí aporozumí (chci říci: nějak, vzásadě) jen málo lidíʼ (Corduas, Sergio: Vladimíru Holanovi. In forma di parole, 1980, n. 1, Elitropia, Reggio Emilia 1980, pp.121–127 /p.126/. Similarly see Corduas, Sergio: Ladislavu Klímovi. In forma di lettera aLadislav Klíma. In forma di parole, 1980, n. 2, Elitropia, Reggio Emilia 1980, pp.193–205; Corduas, Sergio: Lettere, frammenti, labirinti. In forma di parole, 1981, n. 3, Elitropia, Reggio Emilia 1981, pp.51–63 (an ironical-philosophical exchange between Corduas and his ideal projection of Jan Amos Komenský that includes areflection on the role of the translator). 17 Afactor that could back up this hypothesis is that in 1982 and 2010 Corduas produced two very similar texts about the Golem, the Robot and Švejk as both representing aCzech cultural entity and having auniversal character (Golem, Robot, Švejk [1982]. In: Sborník prací filozofické Fakulty brněnské univerzity, XLIV, D 42, 1995, Masarykova univerzita vBrně, 1996, pp.23–37; Golem, robot, Švejk: jejich světovost ajejich českost. In: Lenka Jungmannová /ed./: Česká literatura rozhraní aokraje. UČL AV ČR— Akropolis, Praha 2010, pp.437–444). In the first, older one, Ifound reference to aBohemarius as a1983 issue of In forma di parole (therefore of future publication compared with the year of Corduas’ essay), but was not able to retrieve the text Corduas mentioned because it was not in any 1983 issue of the periodical, nor in any other following issue that Icould check (up to 1985). On the other hand, the reference didn’t appear in Corduas’ 2010 text. In his Lettera al dottor Kafka (In forma di parole, 1983/1), Corduas says to be about to commit himself to the translation of Hrabal’s Samota. In 12 poesie di Jaroslav Seifert (In forma di parole, 1984/3), the magazine editors Rolando Gualerzi and Gianni Scalia comment Corduas’ translation of twelve poems by the Nobel prize award winner Jaroslav Seifert mentioning the preparation of a‘Bohemariusʼ in order to honour the Czech literature and culture. After that, the only mention of the Bohemarius Ifound on Corduas’ page of the Ca’Foscari university website, as aresearch still in progress: <www.unive.it/data/persone/5590979/curriculum> [march 15th, 2018]. OPEN ACCESS